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Movie Trailer (First Draft)

Here’s the first draft of our film trailer, complete with sound and backing music. We showed this version of the trailer to our peers and target audience (Young adults aged 15-18 interested in gothic/dark fantasy) in order to get response on which parts worked, what they enjoyed and how we could improve the trailer. Overall it was rated quite good, with many people commenting on the music and quality of the shots. However some people also didn’t feel like certain parts didn’t work as well or as smoothly as they possibly could have done and the final ending confused many with how it was relevent to the overall trailer. We’re hoping to try and improve the pacing of the editing as well as modify the ending to make sure that the trailer is clearer to understand.

I’ll have the finished version of the trailer uploaded as soon as I can.

Categories: First Draft, Planning, Trailers